revised description text

Author: dansmith01

DESCRIPTION

@@ -3,17 +3,21 @@ Type: Package
 Title: Patterned Fills for 'ggplot2' and 'grid' Graphics
 Version: 1.0.3
 Authors@R: c(
-    person("Daniel P.", "Smith", , "dansmith01@gmail.com", role  = c("aut", "cre"),
-           comment = c(ORCID = "0000-0002-2479-2044")),
-    person("Alkek Center for Metagenomics and Microbiome Research", role = c("cph", "fnd"))
-  )
+    person(
+      "Daniel P.", "Smith",
+      email   = "dansmith01@gmail.com",
+      role    = c("aut", "cre"),
+      comment = c(ORCID = "0000-0002-2479-2044")),
+    person(
+      "Alkek Center for Metagenomics and Microbiome Research", 
+      role = c("cph", "fnd") ))
 Maintainer: Daniel P. Smith <dansmith01@gmail.com>
-Description: Adds distinctive yet unobtrusive geometric patterns where solid 
-    color fills are normally used. Patterned figures look just as 
-    professional when viewed by colorblind readers or when printed in black 
-    and white. The dozen included patterns can be customized in terms of scale,
-    rotation, color, fill, line type, and line width. Compatible with the 
-    'ggplot2' package as well as 'grid' graphics.
+Description: Provides geometric patterns to replace solid color fills in
+    statistical graphics. These patterns ensure figures remain distinguishable
+    when viewed by colorblind readers or when printed in black and white. The
+    included patterns can be customized in terms of scale, rotation, color,
+    fill, line type, and line width. Compatible with the 'ggplot2' package as
+    well as 'grid' graphics.
 URL: https://cmmr.github.io/fillpattern/, https://github.com/cmmr/fillpattern
 BugReports: https://github.com/cmmr/fillpattern/issues
 License: MIT + file LICENSE

README.Rmd

@@ -25,11 +25,11 @@ knitr::opts_chunk$set(
 <!-- badges: end -->
 
 
-`fillpattern` streamlines the process of adding distinctive yet unobtrusive geometric patterns in place of solid grob/geom fills. The resultant figures look just as professional when viewed by colorblind readers or when printed in black and white.
+`fillpattern` provides geometric patterns to replace solid color fills in statistical graphics. These patterns ensure figures remain distinguishable when viewed by colorblind readers or when printed in black and white.
 
 Compared to the similar [`ggpattern`](https://coolbutuseless.github.io/package/ggpattern/index.html) package, `fillpattern`:
 
-* Has no dependencies beyond base R and `ggplot2`.
+* Has no dependencies beyond base R and [`ggplot2`](https://ggplot2.tidyverse.org).
 * Works with `ggplot2::geom_*` functions.
 * Focuses on simple geometric patterns.
 

README.md

@@ -11,16 +11,17 @@
 [![covr](https://img.shields.io/codecov/c/gh/cmmr/fillpattern?logo=codecov)](https://app.codecov.io/gh/cmmr/fillpattern)
 <!-- badges: end -->
 
-`fillpattern` streamlines the process of adding distinctive yet
-unobtrusive geometric patterns in place of solid grob/geom fills. The
-resultant figures look just as professional when viewed by colorblind
-readers or when printed in black and white.
+`fillpattern` provides geometric patterns to replace solid color fills
+in statistical graphics. These patterns ensure figures remain
+distinguishable when viewed by colorblind readers or when printed in
+black and white.
 
 Compared to the similar
 [`ggpattern`](https://coolbutuseless.github.io/package/ggpattern/index.html)
 package, `fillpattern`:
 
-- Has no dependencies beyond base R and `ggplot2`.
+- Has no dependencies beyond base R and
+  [`ggplot2`](https://ggplot2.tidyverse.org).
 - Works with `ggplot2::geom_*` functions.
 - Focuses on simple geometric patterns.