Update partnerships page copy #9

Author: LinaKind

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           <img src="images/pkp-logo.png" alt="PKP" class="partner-logo" />
-          <p>We are partnering with <a href="https://pkp.sfu.ca/">Public Knowledge Project (PKP)</a> to develop a high-fidelity, JATS production solution. While JATS XML is the global standard for scholarly content, high costs and technical complexity exclude approximately 80% of open-access journals, largely in the Global South, from meeting these requirements.</p>
-          <p> By leveraging existing work and tools and enhancing them with open-source LLMs, this collaboration will develop a free, automated solution that enables any journal to produce standards-compliant, machine-readable metadata.</p>
+          <p>We are partnering with <a href="https://pkp.sfu.ca/">Public Knowledge Project (PKP)</a> to build a high-fidelity JATS-XML production solution that gives journals more publishing options, regardless of platform or location. By enhancing existing tools with open-source LLMs, our approach will  lower the cost and complexity that exclude many open-access journals—especially in the global south—from this standard.</p>
+          <p>The result will be a free, automated way for any journal to produce standards-compliant, machine-readable metadata.</p>
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             <img src="images/csf-logo.png" alt="CSF" class="partner-logo partner-logo--csf" />
             <img src="images/openrxiv-logo.png" alt="openRxiv" class="partner-logo partner-logo--openrxiv" />
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-          <p>In collaboration with the <a href="https://continuousfoundation.org/">Continuous Science Foundation (CSF)</a> and <a href="https://openrxiv.org/">openRxiv</a>, we are building the foundations for modular science. We are helping to develop the <a href="https://oxa.dev/">Open Exchange Architecture (OXA)</a>, a new community standard for interoperable, structured scientific content.</p>
-          <p>OXA defines open, extensible schemas that describe modular and composable scientific documents helping to bridge the gap between authoring systems and the scientific publishing ecosystem.</p>
+          <p>In collaboration with <a href="https://continuousfoundation.org/">Continuous Science Foundation (CSF)</a> and <a href="https://openrxiv.org/">openRxiv</a>, this work contributes to the foundations of modular science. Together, we are advancing the <a href="https://oxa.dev/">Open Exchange Architecture (OXA)</a>, a community-led standard for interoperable, structured scientific content.</p>
+          <p>OXA defines open, extensible schemas that support modular, composable scientific documents, helping bridge authoring tools and the broader scientific publishing ecosystem.</p>
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