@mmcky @jstac -- The following are mismatches between the HTML version and the PDF version in Appendix A and B.
1. PDF citation rendering issue in Appendices A and B
One example in Appendix A (PDF):

One example in Appendix B (PDF):

PDF: In Appendices A and B, some citations appear in an “Author, year” form even where the citation is used as part of the sentence, as shown in the examples above.
HTML: In the corresponding locations, the HTML renders these citations in a narrative author–year form, such as “Bartle & Sherbert (2011)” and “Dudley (2002)”.
Issue: The PDF rendering seems incorrect in these contexts. These citations should probably be rendered in a narrative form, such as “Bartle and Sherbert (2011)” and “Dudley (2002).”
Final note
This completes my review of Vol. I. It took me a little longer than expected, but I have tried to check the PDF/HTML comparison carefully throughout. I’m fairly confident that the main structural and visual issues I could identify have now been flagged or resolved.
Please let me know if there is anything else I should check. I’d be happy to help 😊
Thanks!
@mmcky @jstac -- The following are mismatches between the HTML version and the PDF version in Appendix A and B.
1. PDF citation rendering issue in Appendices A and B
One example in Appendix A (PDF):

One example in Appendix B (PDF):

PDF: In Appendices A and B, some citations appear in an “Author, year” form even where the citation is used as part of the sentence, as shown in the examples above.
HTML: In the corresponding locations, the HTML renders these citations in a narrative author–year form, such as “Bartle & Sherbert (2011)” and “Dudley (2002)”.
Issue: The PDF rendering seems incorrect in these contexts. These citations should probably be rendered in a narrative form, such as “Bartle and Sherbert (2011)” and “Dudley (2002).”
Final note
This completes my review of Vol. I. It took me a little longer than expected, but I have tried to check the PDF/HTML comparison carefully throughout. I’m fairly confident that the main structural and visual issues I could identify have now been flagged or resolved.
Please let me know if there is anything else I should check. I’d be happy to help 😊
Thanks!