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2 changes: 1 addition & 1 deletion README.md
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Expand Up @@ -15,4 +15,4 @@ and use it 3 times inside the `App` instead of static markup.
- Install Prettier Extension and use this [VSCode settings](https://mate-academy.github.io/fe-program/tools/vscode/settings.json) to enable format on save.
- Implement a solution following the [React task guideline](https://github.com/mate-academy/react_task-guideline#react-tasks-guideline).
- Open one more terminal and run tests with `npm test` to ensure your solution is correct.
- Replace `<your_account>` with your Github username in the [DEMO LINK](https://<your_account>.github.io/react_person/) and add it to the PR description.
- Replace `<your_account>` with your Github username in the [DEMO LINK](https://azesmmisha.github.io/react_person/) and add it to the PR description.
20 changes: 4 additions & 16 deletions src/App.jsx
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import React from 'react';
import { Person } from './components/Person/Person';
import './App.scss';
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This violates checklist item #1: Use destructuring for getting access to values of props object. Only person is destructured, but properties like name, age, isMarried, partnerName, and sex are accessed via person.property. Consider destructuring all needed properties directly from props.


export const misha = {
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export const App = () => (
<div className="App">
<section className="Person">
<h2 className="Person__name">My name is Misha</h2>
<p className="Person__age">I am 37</p>
<p className="Person__partner">Natasha is my wife</p>
</section>

<section className="Person">
<h2 className="Person__name">My name is Olya</h2>
<p className="Person__partner">Maksym is my husband</p>
</section>

<section className="Person">
<h2 className="Person__name">My name is Alex</h2>
<p className="Person__age">I am 25</p>
<p className="Person__partner">I am not married</p>
</section>
<Person person={misha} />
<Person person={olya} />
<Person person={alex} />
</div>
);
17 changes: 0 additions & 17 deletions src/App.scss
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iframe {
display: none;
}

.Person {
width: fit-content;
margin-bottom: 16px;
padding: 8px;
border: 1px solid #000;
border-radius: 8px;

&__name {
margin-top: 8px;
}

&__age {
color: #00f;
font-weight: bold;
}
}
16 changes: 15 additions & 1 deletion src/components/Person/Person.jsx
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// export const Person = ({ person }) => ();
import './Person.scss';

export const Person = ({ person }) => {
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This violates checklist item #1: Use destructuring for getting access to values of props object. While person is destructured, the nested properties (name, age, sex, isMarried, partnerName) are accessed directly on person instead of being destructured individually. Consider destructuring all properties at the top level of the component.

return (
<section className="Person">
<h2 className="Person__name">{`My name is ${person.name}`}</h2>
{person.age && <p className="Person__age">{`I am ${person.age}`}</p>}
<p className="Person__partner">
{person.isMarried
? `${person.partnerName} is my ${person.sex === 'm' ? 'wife' : 'husband'}`
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This violates checklist item #3: Avoid putting several cases to conditional rendering. Create separate variable for the condition. The ternary on line 9 has a nested ternary expression on line 10. Extract the partner type to a separate variable before the return statement to improve readability.

: 'I am not married'}
</p>
</section>
);
};
16 changes: 16 additions & 0 deletions src/components/Person/Person.scss
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.Person {
width: fit-content;
margin-bottom: 16px;
padding: 8px;
border: 1px solid #000;
border-radius: 8px;

&__name {
margin-top: 8px;
}
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This violates checklist item #3: avoid putting several cases to conditional rendering. The nested ternary {person.sex === 'm' ? 'wife' : 'husband'} inside another ternary makes the code hard to read. Create a separate variable for the partner label before the return statement.


&__age {
color: #00f;
font-weight: bold;
}
}
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