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docs(whitepaper): cite Figures 5 and 18 before they print; tighten Section 2 flow - #1802
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…ction 2 flow Figure 5 printed on page 13 but was first cited on page 14. The opening sentence of Section 6.8 (page 12) now points to it; the line count is unchanged, so the P1 TBD anchor stays at flywheel_status.tex line 84. Figure 18 printed on page 22 but its discussion (then D.13) began on page 23. Moving that section right after D.10 groups the admission sections (D.10, D.11) ahead of the program-event sections (D.12, D.13) and puts its text on page 22 beside the figure. The closing \FloatBarrier moves to the end of the appendix wrapper, so it still ends Appendix D. Section 2 prose: Campbell's three-mechanism paragraph, which motivates the fourth pillar, now precedes the pillar definitions; the one-sentence AlphaGo paragraph joins the chess paragraph it continues; and "update the generator" reads "update the proposer", as in Section 2.5. No claim, number, citation or TBD changes. 28 pages, 0 warnings.
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Same-agent review (wp_opus_layout, the author of this PR; not an independent review) at exact head 9df058d.
Scope: 5 files.
02_anatomy.tex: one paragraph moved, two paragraphs joined, one word changed.flywheel_status.tex: lines 5–6 rewrapped with "(\cref{fig:fw-latest-admissions})".appendix_latest_event_rates.tex: input order changed, plus the closing\FloatBarrier.appendix_candidate_retained_trace.tex: trailing\FloatBarrierremoved.- The PDF.
Findings, each checked:
- Figure 5: first cited p. 12, prints p. 13. Figure 18: first cited p. 22, prints p. 22. No other float changes page.
- Anchors:
flywheel_status.texkeeps 102 lines, and the P1 TBD stays at line 84. All 35RESULTS_NEEDSanchors land on\TBD{lines. - Appendix order:
- Content: the moved section has no order-dependent wording ("the earlier ledger", "this separate capture"). D.12 and D.13 mention neither D.11 nor each other.
- Barrier:
\FloatBarrierstill closes Appendix D, so Figures 17–18 print before the references. - Numbering: only the three reordered subsections renumber, and every reference to them is
\cref. A grep finds no hard-coded D.1x text.
- §2 edits:
- Words: the Campbell paragraph is moved verbatim, and the AlphaGo sentence is unchanged.
- Meaning: "proposer" matches §2.5's usage. The random "generator" uses keep their separate meaning.
- Flow: the new order sets out the three mechanisms and the aim as fourth pillar before defining the pillars.
- Text: the word list differs only by "(Figure 5)", generator→proposer, and the cleveref list for the renumbered sections. No claim, number, citation or TBD changes.
- Pages and gates:
- 28 pages, 0 warnings, 0 boxes;
- 37 TBDs, 124/124 keys;
- five record gates pass, and the committed PDF reproduces;
git diff --checkis clean; fonts equal main's apart from object numbering.
Disposition: no blocking finding.
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wp_t0250_layout flow pass (wp_opus_layout) on main
058244645(paper = ff80e94). Claim in AGENT_CHAT.md; it avoids wp_sol_writer's flywheel-figure work.1. Figures 5 and 18 no longer print before their first citation
Figure 5 (
06_method/flywheel_status.tex):RESULTS_NEEDS.mdanchor still lands on its\TBD{line.Figure 18 (
appendix_latest_event_rates.tex,appendix_candidate_retained_trace.tex):\FloatBarrierthat closed D.13 moves to the end of the appendix wrapper, so it still ends Appendix D before the references.No other float moves. The §6.8 pointer now renders "Appendices D, D.10, D.12 and D.13" (cleveref, from the same four labels).
2. Prose flow: Section 2
Every edit keeps the wording; there are no new claims, and §2 has no TBDs or anchors.
Effect
Words: the rendered word list differs from main only by:
Pages: only pp. 3, 4, 12, 14, 22 and 23 change.
Labels: no figure, table, equation or main-text section label changes page or number. Only the three reordered appendix sections renumber:
All references to them use
\cref.Short columns: unchanged (p. 20 right, below Table 10).
Widows: none new.
Verification
Fresh
git archiveof exact head9df058dd349eda0b320cd36b672f6cc4fec68673,nice -n 19 make pdfwithSOURCE_DATE_EPOCH= parent commit time and the cm-super texmf:RESULTS_NEEDS.mdanchors on\TBD{lines.Further checks:
jope-recordsgates pass on a full export with the head's index.git diff --checkis clean.docs/paper/innovationzero, not this paper.No new lane (39/8). Receipt:
~/whitepaper_tmp_t541/layout-1102t0250/.Merge: the owner brief wp_t0250_layout authorizes a self squash merge with
--adminwithin 30 minutes of the passing build.🤖 Generated with Claude Code