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実害のあるもの: - 縦書きのページは列の位置で埋まり縦の位置を進めないため、<hr> と表の行の区切りが ページ上端を横切る横線になっていた。<hr> は空いた列1列(ページ頭では何もしない)、 表の行の線は縦書きでは出さない。章の版 55→56。 - Text Settings で Font Copy in Flash が Off のまま書体・大きさを変えると、読み込んだ 直後に強制的に読み直し、SD から表を2回読んでいた。Off かつ SD から読んでいるときは省く。 - 保存済みの文字列の読み込み(3つの版)で、長さや本体が途中で切れていても成功扱い だった。読めたバイト数を確かめて失敗を返す。 条件が重なれば起きうるもの: - 本体の書き換えは書体の複製と同じ領域を消す。失敗して UI に戻ると複製を読み続けて いたため、書き換えの開始前(SD から・ネットから)に次の再起動まで複製を無効にする。 - 字ごとの改行位置を文字数の 1/3 で見込んで確保していたため、英字と漢字が交互の並びで 再確保になりえた。先に数えてちょうどの量を確保する。 潜在的なもの: 時計の RTC 失敗時の未初期化値、字の走査の診断値の 0 戻しの順序、 ZIP の取り出しで 512B 未満の塊の要求、番号を共有する環境の限定(ost_version.py)。 実機確認: 2026093006-diag(X3・X4 Pro)。vertical-rule-table-test.epub の3章、 Font Copy in Flash の On/Off での書体・大きさの変更、時計モード。 Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <noreply@anthropic.com> Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01GSMiDKH4CDUUtu78uJCe4F
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Navigate logical layers of code changes, visualize relationships, and explore their blast radius. 📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughフラッシュ更新時のフォントキャッシュ制御、EPUBの改行候補と縦書き表示、シリアライズとZIP処理を変更しています。ライブラリ形式の記述とテスト、ビルド番号判定、時計画面の日時初期化も更新しています。 Changesフォントキャッシュ
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Estimated code review effort: 3 (Moderate) | ~25 minutes Change: Bug fix Sequence Diagram(s)sequenceDiagram
participant OtaUpdater
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OtaUpdater->>SdCardFontCache: invalidateUntilReboot()
OtaUpdater->>esp_ota_begin: OTA開始
RenderTask->>SdCardFontCache: isValidFor() と readAt()
SdCardFontCache-->>RenderTask: 更新中は無効を返し、読み取りを拒否
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test/library_index_file/LibraryIndexFileTest.cpp (1)
139-145: 🗄️ Data Integrity & Integration | 🔵 Trivial | ⚡ Quick winauthor reading フィールドを fixture と assertion に戻してください。
LibraryBuilderは名前の後に、author、title、source author、author reading の4つの長さ付きフィールドを書き込みます。現在の fixture は source author で終わるため、現行形式の blob ではありません。readAuthorReadingの検証も削除されたため、このテストは field 3 の欠落を検出しません。Suggested fix
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- Line 203: Update EXPECTED_VERSION to 56 so the SectionBin version check
accepts the version used by Section.cpp’s finalized section.bin.
Review comments at @lib/EpdFont/SdCardFontCache.cpp:
- Line 260: Use a shared synchronization mechanism to protect the full read
sequence in readAt—from checking slotBeingUpdated through completion of
HalOtaSlot::read—and the update sequence beginning in invalidateUntilReboot,
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- Around line 139-145: Update the fixture blob in the LibraryIndexFileTest setup
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EXPECTED_VERSIONを56に合わせてください。
SectionBin.versionはEXPECTED_VERSIONと比較されます。一方、Section.cppの確定済みsection.binはバージョン56を使用します。現在の48では、ファイル形式定義が実ファイルをUnsupported versionとして扱います。
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ESP-IDF esp_partition_read esp_partition_erase_range thread safe flash operation lock concurrent read erase official documentation
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**The flash driver serializes access to the hardware, but that does not make a multi-call read/erase sequence atomic.**
- `esp_partition_read()` and `esp_partition_erase_range()` are partition-bounded wrappers around lower-level flash operations. ([docs.espressif.com](https://docs.espressif.com/projects/esp-idf/en/latest/esp32s31/api-reference/storage/partition.html?utm_source=openai))
- The current SPI Flash guide says flash APIs are **not atomic**: when a write overlaps an in-progress read, the read may return a mixture of old and updated data. ([docs.espressif.com](https://docs.espressif.com/projects/esp-idf/en/stable/esp32/api-reference/peripherals/spi_flash/index.html?utm_source=openai))
- The driver source shows internal locking around flash access, but erase releases/reacquires access between erase chunks. That prevents unsafe simultaneous hardware use; it does **not** guarantee a consistent snapshot across concurrent operations on the same region. ([github.com](https://github.com/espressif/esp-idf/blob/master/components/spi_flash/spi_flash_os_func_app.c?utm_source=openai))
**Practical takeaway:** concurrent calls can use the driver’s internal synchronization, but if one task must not read a region while another task erases or modifies it—or you need an erase-plus-write sequence to be indivisible—coordinate those tasks with your own mutex or other application-level protocol. The docs specifically describe read/write overlap, not a precise read-versus-erase result; treat overlapping access as requiring coordination.
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`pioarduino/platform-espressif32` **55.03.311** bundles Arduino-ESP32 **3.3.11**, based on **ESP-IDF 5.5.5**. (GitHub issue 12899 in espressif/arduino-esp32 (link omitted to avoid creating a cross-reference))
For that IDF generation, the usual APIs are `esp_flash_read()` and `esp_flash_erase_region()` (or the higher-level `esp_partition_read()` / `esp_partition_erase_range()` when accessing a partition on the main flash). Reads don’t require alignment; erase start and length must be sector-aligned—typically 4 KiB. ([docs.espressif.com](https://docs.espressif.com/projects/esp-idf/en/release-v5.5/esp32/api-reference/peripherals/spi_flash/index.html?utm_source=openai))
**Locking:** ESP-IDF’s flash API provides internal locking; its documentation describes a mutex protecting flash operations, plus coordination around cache/bus access. Flash calls are **not atomic as a group**: overlapping read and write operations can return mixed old/new data. If you need a multi-call sequence to be indivisible relative to other tasks, the cited API page does not establish that ordinary calls provide such transaction-level locking. ([docs.espressif.com](https://docs.espressif.com/projects/esp-idf/en/release-v5.5/esp32/api-reference/peripherals/spi_flash/index.html?utm_source=openai))
The locking details above are from ESP-IDF’s **release-v5.5** documentation, not a direct inspection of the exact `55.03.311` bundled source, so minor packaging-specific differences remain unverified.
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- 1: GitHub issue 12899 in espressif/arduino-esp32 (link omitted to avoid creating a cross-reference)
- 2: https://docs.espressif.com/projects/esp-idf/en/release-v5.5/esp32/api-reference/peripherals/spi_flash/index.html?utm_source=openai
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<|OPENAI|analysis 代期特码>読み取り判定と更新開始を同じ同期で保護してください。
readAt() は slotBeingUpdated を確認した後に HalOtaSlot::read() を呼びます。この間に更新タスクがフラグを設定して消去を完了すると、読み取りは消去済みまたは更新途中のデータを成功扱いで取得できます。
ESP-IDF は個々の flash 操作を直列化しますが、読み取りと更新の複数操作を原子的には扱いません。SdCardFont::read() は読み取り失敗時だけ SD にフォールバックするため、不整合なデータを返す読み取りを検出できません。
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実装のバージョンに合わせて期待値と文書を 3 に戻してください。
CLIX_FORMAT_VERSION は現在も 3 です。StructSizesAreFrozen は 2u を期待するため失敗します。このテストは LibraryFormatTest として登録されています。CLX1 文書も 3 に戻してください。
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EXPECT_EQ(sizeof(ClixHeader), 64u);
EXPECT_EQ(sizeof(ClixRecord), 128u);
EXPECT_EQ(sizeof(ClixFolderHeader), 1u);
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@@ -415,7 +415,7 @@ Written by `lib/LibraryIndex/LibraryBuilder.cpp`, read by `LibraryIndexFile`. One
file describing every book on the card, so the shelf can sort and search
thousands of titles without opening any of them.
-Format version 2. An index written by another version fails validation on open
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fork PR #5(#4 の指摘への修正のレビュー)で CodeRabbit が挙げた件。readAt() が 無効化の印を確かめた直後に書き換え側が印を立てて消去に進むと、読み取りが消去中の 領域を成功扱いで読みえた。読み取り中の数を数え、invalidateUntilReboot() は印を 立てたあと 0 になるまで待つ(1回の読みは字か表の一部で、数ミリ秒以内)。 あわせて docs/file-formats.md の章の保存の版を 56 に合わせる。 同じレビューのテスト2件への指摘は、レビュー用の枝で土台の状態に戻したテストを 読んだ誤検知のため対応しない。 実機確認: 2026093007-diag(X3・X4 Pro、Font Copy in Flash On での読書)。 Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <noreply@anthropic.com> Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01GSMiDKH4CDUUtu78uJCe4F
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レビュー専用のため併合せずに閉じます。書体の複製の読み取りと消去の競合、docs の版は vertical-1.6.5 の 18c846a で修正し、2026093007-diag で実機確認済み。テスト2件への指摘は、レビュー用の枝で土台の状態に戻したテストを読んだものなので対応しません。 |
レビュー専用の PR です(併合しません)。#4 のレビュー(
review/02-rest)より後の OST版vertical-1.6.5(c08f5e39)の変更で、#4 で受けた指摘9件への修正(8d023b3a)です。範囲
<hr>を空いた列1列に、表の行の区切り線は縦書きでは出さない(章の版 55→56)readString(3つの版): 長さ・本体の読み込みが途中で切れたら失敗を返すSdCardFontCache::invalidateUntilReboot())now{}、字の走査の診断値の 0 戻しの順序、ZIP の 512B 未満の塊、ビルド番号を共有する環境の限定レビュー対象から外したもの
#4 と同じく、最後のコミット(review only)で README.md などを土台と同じ状態に戻してある。この枝はビルドできない。
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