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Forward Resync: os.md

Source: QuantEcon/lecture-python.mystlectures/os.md
Source commit: b27f1eb
This PR resyncs the translation to match the current source document.

Reason: Several substantive differences exist: (1) The 'Intuition' section's two numbered points and the note about IES (intertemporal elasticity of substitution) formality are removed/altered in TARGET, replaced with different reasoning about marginal utility decay; (2) In the 'Optimal policy' section, TARGET uses v(x-c) instead of v*(x-c) in the argmax formulas, which is a formula difference from SOURCE; (3) Most critically, the solution for exercise cep_ex2 (verifying the Euler equation for the optimal policy) is entirely missing from TARGET, whereas SOURCE contains a full derivation and proof for it.

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Whole-file resync applied. The entire document was resynced in a single pass.


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Pull request overview

This PR forward-resyncs the Chinese translation of lectures/os.md to match the latest upstream source lecture, including restoring missing content and aligning key formulas.

Changes:

  • Adds translation frontmatter metadata (title + heading mappings) for os.md.
  • Resyncs narrative and math content to upstream, including corrected optimal-policy formulas and added explanatory notes.
  • Restores the missing exercise cep_ex2 and its full solution/derivation.

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lectures/os.md Full-document resync to upstream source, including restored exercise solution and corrected formulas/notes.
.translate/state/os.md.yml Adds resync state metadata (source SHA, sync date, model/mode).

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✅ Translation Quality Review

Verdict: PASS | Model: claude-sonnet-5 | Date: 2026-07-19


📝 Translation Quality

Criterion Score
Accuracy 9/10
Fluency 9/10
Terminology 9/10
Formatting 9/10
Overall 9/10

Summary: This is a high-quality translation that accurately conveys the technical and mathematical content of the source document. Terminology is consistent with the glossary, formatting is well-preserved, and the prose reads naturally in academic Chinese. The main issues are minor: two external reference links (Gateaux derivative and Envelope Theorem) were changed from Wikipedia to Chinese-language sources of lower authority, which could be reconsidered, and one sentence has slightly redundant phrasing that could be smoothed further. Excellent handling of complex mathematical derivations and LaTeX formatting, all equations preserved correctly Consistent and accurate use of established terminology (贝尔曼方程, 欧拉方程, 状态变量, 控制变量, etc.) matching the glossary Natural and fluent academic Chinese register throughout, especially in the intuitive explanations of trade-offs and consumption smoothing Code blocks and cross-references (e.g., {eq}, {doc}, {cite}) are all correctly preserved

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  • Gateaux derivative link: the translation links to a Chinese Baidu Baike page (百度百科) instead of Wikipedia, and uses '加托导数' as translation - this deviates from source's Wikipedia link; consider keeping consistent with source's linking convention or note this substitution
  • Envelope Theorem link: translated to a CSDN blog link (https://blog.csdn.net/...) instead of the Wikipedia link in the source; while the term '包络定理' is correct, substituting the authoritative Wikipedia reference with a blog post reduces reference quality/reliability
  • In '大 $\gamma$ 意味着 $u$ 的曲率更大,意味着对消费平滑有更强的偏好' - minor redundancy with repeated '意味着' twice in one sentence; could rephrase as '较高的 $\gamma$ 意味着 $u$ 的曲率更大,从而对消费平滑有更强的偏好' for better flow

🔍 Diff Quality

Check Status
Scope Correct
Position Correct
Structure Preserved
Heading-map Correct
Overall 10/10

Summary: The resync correctly re-aligned the target document to match the source structure, with appropriate translation metadata added and content properly repositioned.


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