DOCPLAN-170: Restructured primary udn assembly for DITA compliance#110244
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Couple of minor comments / suggestions, otherwise lgtm!
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| You can create a primary `UserDefinedNetwork` or `ClusterUserDefinedNetwork` CRD by using the CLI. After you define the custom primary overlay network, you can create namespaces that are associated with the cluster-scoped UDN. No newline at end of file |
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| You can create a primary `UserDefinedNetwork` or `ClusterUserDefinedNetwork` CRD by using the CLI. After you define the custom primary overlay network, you can create namespaces that are associated with the cluster-scoped UDN. | |
| You can create a primary `UserDefinedNetwork` or `ClusterUserDefinedNetwork` custom resource definition (CRD) by using the {oc-first}. After you define the custom primary overlay network, you can create namespaces that are associated with the cluster-scoped UDN. |
Not sure if you need to spell out CRD on first use in the module?
Also, I'd maybe specify which CLI this is referring to, e.g. use the {oc-first} attribute if it's oc
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| You can use the {product-title} web console to create a primary namespace-scoped `UserDefinedNetwork` or a cluster-scoped `ClusterUserDefinedNetwork` CRD. The UDN serves as the default primary network for pods and VMs that you create in namespaces associated with the network. |
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Same comment re CRD, not sure if we need to spell it out
Version(s): 4.20+
Issue: https://redhat.atlassian.net/browse/DOCPLAN-170
Link to docs preview: https://110244--ocpdocs-pr.netlify.app/openshift-enterprise/latest/virt/vm_networking/virt-connecting-vm-to-primary-udn.html
QE review: N/A
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